PART 2 – When My Daughter Said She Heard A Heartbeat, My Brother-In-Law Tried To Stop The Doctor From Examining My Husband Again

I wanted Chloe to be wrong.

That is difficult to admit.

But if she was wrong, I was only a grieving wife with a frightened little girl.

If she was right, something far worse had happened.

My daughter was still inside the coffin.

She watched me as though she expected me to know what to do.

I didn't.

I looked around the living room.

My relatives had stopped talking.

Teresa stood with one hand against the back of a chair.

Marcus was watching Chloe.

Nobody seemed willing to move.

Then my mother-in-law spoke.

"Claire, please get her down."

I turned toward her.

"She says she heard something."

Teresa wiped her face.

"She's upset. You know that."

"She said she felt his heart."

"She's eight years old."

I looked at Chloe.

Eight years old.

Everyone kept coming back to that.

As though her age made it impossible for her to notice anything real.

I knew my daughter.

She could misunderstand things.

She could make mistakes.

But when she was uncertain, she said so.

That night, she had been trying to tell us something for hours.

I had been too busy listening to everyone else.

Marcus approached me.

"Claire, don't make this worse."

I stared at him.

"Worse for whom?"

He frowned.

"You're not thinking clearly."

"Then help me understand."

He glanced toward the coffin.

"We already know what happened."

I felt my hands begin to shake.

"Do we?"

He didn't answer.

I looked at Chloe again.

Her cheek had been pressed against Mark's chest.

She wasn't laughing.

She wasn't trying to frighten anyone.

She was waiting for me.

I reached into the coffin and lifted her into my arms.

She clung to my neck.

Her body had started trembling.

"Please don't let them move him," she whispered.

I kissed her forehead.

"I won't let anyone rush us."

I carried her to the sofa.

Then I went back to the coffin.

Marcus stood between me and the nearest relatives.

I asked him to step aside.

He didn't move immediately.

"Claire, think about what you're doing."

"I am."

"You're upsetting everyone."

I looked him directly in the face.

"Then let everyone be upset."

That was the first time I had spoken to him like that.

I wasn't trying to be brave.

I was simply tired of being told to stop asking questions.

Near the doorway stood Dr. Salgado.

He had come to the viewing earlier in the evening.

Until then, I had barely noticed him.

Now I walked straight toward him.

"Doctor, would you examine Mark again?"

The question caught him off guard.

He looked toward Marcus.

I saw it.

One quick glance.

Then he looked back at me.

"Mrs. Vance, your husband was examined at the clinic."

"I know."

He seemed uncomfortable.

I continued.

"My daughter believes she detected a heartbeat."

The doctor looked toward the coffin.

"Sometimes people in distress can mistake other sensations for a pulse."

"Then please check."

He hesitated.

I could feel Marcus standing behind me.

Finally, the doctor nodded.

"All right."

Marcus spoke immediately.

"I don't think that's necessary."

Everyone turned toward him.

He raised his hands slightly.

"I'm just saying Claire has been through enough."

I looked at him.

"That's for me to decide."

He pressed his lips together.

I stepped away so Dr. Salgado could reach the coffin.

The doctor leaned over Mark and placed his fingers against his neck.

I watched his face.

He waited.

Then he moved his fingers and tried again.

His expression tightened.

I moved closer.

"Did you feel anything?"

He didn't answer right away.

He asked someone to turn on another light.

A relative hurried toward the lamp.

The room became brighter.

Dr. Salgado leaned down again.

He examined Mark's face.

Then his skin.

I watched him carefully.

Something about the examination seemed to trouble him.

I asked what was wrong.

He said Mark's temperature was unusual.

That answer confused me.

"Unusual how?"

He didn't explain clearly.

Marcus interrupted.

"He's been dead for two days. Of course he's cold."

I looked at the doctor.

He did not agree.

But he didn't correct Marcus either.

I had never felt so frustrated with a medical professional.

I needed a clear answer.

Instead, I was watching a man hesitate beside my husband's coffin.

I asked him to continue the examination.

Marcus came closer.

"Claire, enough."

I turned.

"Why are you so determined to stop this?"

His jaw tightened.

"I'm trying to protect you."

"From what?"

He looked around.

No answer.

Teresa began crying again.

I could hear her speaking quietly to someone.

She said Mark deserved a peaceful farewell.

I looked toward her.

For years, she had spoken about her sons with pride.

She loved having the family together.

She was always telling Chloe stories about their childhood.

I had believed she would do anything for them.

Now her younger son was lying in a coffin, and she seemed more concerned about ending the examination than understanding what was happening.

It didn't make sense.

I felt something shifting inside me.

Not certainty.

Suspicion.

There was a difference.

I didn't know whether Chloe had really heard a heartbeat.

I didn't know whether the doctor had made a mistake.

But I knew Marcus was behaving strangely.

And I knew what Mark had told me before he collapsed.

Don't sign anything Marcus brings you.

I reached into my pocket and felt my phone vibrate.

I almost ignored it.

Then I glanced down.

The message had come from a number I didn't recognize.

I opened it.

The sender claimed Mark had uncovered something Marcus was hiding at the company.

The message said other people knew about the records.

I read it twice.

Then another message appeared.

It warned me not to rely on anyone in Teresa's house.

My hands went cold.

I looked around the room.

Marcus was watching me.

"What is it?" he asked.

"Nothing."

I locked the phone.

I hated lying.

But I couldn't imagine handing him those messages.

A third notification arrived.

This time, it was a photograph.

I turned slightly away from the room and opened it.

Mark stood inside the warehouse.

Marcus was beside him.

Papers were spread across a metal table.

Mark looked angry.

Marcus appeared tense.

Then I noticed the time attached to the image.

It was from the day Mark supposedly died.

And it had been taken after the time Marcus said his brother collapsed.

I enlarged the photograph.

There was no mistaking either man.

I knew Mark's clothes.

I recognized the warehouse.

I recognized Marcus.

The timing was what I couldn't understand.

If Mark had collapsed when Marcus claimed, how could he have been standing there afterward?

I thought about the phone call.

The machinery.

The shouting.

Marcus refusing to tell me whether Mark was alive.

I thought about how quickly he had arranged everything after the clinic.

I looked up from the photograph.

He was still watching me.

"Claire, you're very pale."

I put the phone away.

"I'm tired."

He seemed to accept that.

Or perhaps he only pretended to.

I returned to Chloe.

She was sitting on the couch with her hands tucked beneath her legs.

I knelt in front of her.

"Sweetheart, I need to ask you something."

She looked worried.

"Am I in trouble?"

"No."

I brushed her hair away from her face.

"Did Daddy tell you anything before he went to work?"

Chloe thought for a moment.

Then she looked past me.

Toward Marcus.

My stomach tightened.

"What is it?"

She lowered her voice.

"I heard them fighting."

"Who?"

"Daddy and Uncle Marcus."

I sat down beside her.

"When was that?"

"The day before Daddy went away."

I hadn't known they had argued.

Mark had told me he was investigating something at the company.

But he hadn't told me he had confronted his brother.

I asked Chloe what she remembered.

She held her hands together.

"Daddy sounded really mad."

"Did he say why?"

She nodded.

"He said Uncle Marcus was going to ruin everything for us."

I felt the blood drain from my face.

Marcus had moved closer.

"Claire, don't interrogate her."

I looked up.

"I'm talking to my daughter."

"She's remembering things incorrectly."

Chloe shook her head.

"No, I'm not."

Her voice was small.

But she didn't back down.

I looked at her.

"What did your uncle say?"

She took a breath.

"He said Daddy should have given him the business when he asked."

The room seemed to grow quieter.

I looked at Marcus.

He stood completely still.

Teresa had heard the exchange.

I saw her face change.

For the first time, she looked frightened of Marcus.

"Marcus," she said quietly.

He didn't turn toward her.

I stood.

"What happened between you and Mark?"

Marcus looked at me for a long moment.

Then he gave a short, bitter smile.

"Your husband never knew when to stop."

I felt my chest tighten.

"Stop what?"

"Getting involved in things he didn't understand."

I couldn't believe what I was hearing.

Mark had worked alongside his brother for years.

They had inherited the company together.

Their father had spent most of his life building it.

Now Marcus was standing beside Mark's coffin speaking about him with resentment.

I thought about the papers in the photograph.

"What did he discover?"

Marcus looked away.

I stepped closer.

"Tell me."

He shook his head.

"You're making a mistake."

Behind me, Teresa spoke again.

"Marcus, please."

There was fear in her voice.

I turned toward her.

She stopped talking.

Then Chloe cried out.

"Mom!"

I spun around.

She was standing beside the couch.

Her arm was extended toward the coffin.

I rushed to her.

"What happened?"

She pointed.

"Daddy moved."

I looked.

Mark still appeared motionless.

But Chloe was shaking her head.

"I saw him."

Dr. Salgado pushed forward.

He asked everyone to move out of the way.

This time, Marcus said nothing.

The doctor bent over Mark.

He checked his neck again.

Then he leaned closer to his face.

I stood beside him.

I couldn't hear anything except the sound of people shifting behind us.

Dr. Salgado examined Mark for what felt like an eternity.

Then he looked up.

His face had changed.

He told someone to call emergency services immediately.

I grabbed his arm.

"Doctor, tell me what's happening."

He looked at me.

"Claire, there may still be signs of life."

I couldn't speak.

He turned toward the relatives.

"Call for an ambulance. Right now."

Someone took out a phone.

Teresa began sobbing.

Marcus stepped backward.

I looked down at Mark.

My husband was lying where we had left him for hours.

In a coffin.

Dressed for burial.

And the doctor who had pronounced him dead was now asking for help to save his life.


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